I belong in this moment; to those my heart holds dear - but I am no ones belonging
I belong to myself; feel a sense of home within - all places with welcome open arms
To my thoughts I can belong, until fluid thoughts run free - set in time worn words as mine
I belong where accepted; I accept where I belong – Without acceptance I am left to be - longing...
Written in response to our prompt from this week’s POW Destiny:
Destiny’s prompt guidelines
Compose a free verse poem of no more than 12 lines on the theme of ‘belonging’.
Each of us interprets this word uniquely, and its significance may evolve throughout various stages of our lives. Feel free to delve into your personal reflections and follow where your thoughts take you.
This walk is not about what belongs to him, her, or me. It’s not about possessions. It’s about acceptance, connection, fellowship, affinity, association, community, and integration – to be included – to feel a sense of belonging.
Note: You’re not obligated to adhere to any particular interpretation; feel free to explore and share your own thoughts, understanding, and sense of ‘belonging’.
Clickhere to join in or read more about this weekly poetry prompt
My husband says I am a nightmare, actually, a ”complex nightmare”, said with love and understanding of course! In truth the phrase probably does sum me up which is why I will use it.
Explanation:-
• Complex due to my thoughts being varied, deep and even conflicting
• Nightmare due to their constant, numerous and consuming nature.
I am an emotional writer, finding writing a medium with which to express myself; I find this difficult verbally and am averse to any conflict.
I am creative and artistic at work and hobbies; (working in jewellery) but only have enthusiasm for “bespoke” creations. I find it difficult to label a theme to my writing but recently am enjoying learning and experimenting with different forms of poetry. A few very difficult years emotionally have drawn me to this genre. Somehow, I am finding more clarity in my thoughts by using words that are not always so clear, or even placed in a structure that take me out of my comfort zone.... hmmm work that one out LOL.
I am excited to see what I write, as it is a total surprise to me every time; but draws me....
My life experiences are such that I have a personal view on most subjects and if you follow me you may find my topics to be what my daughter would call “random”.
Even when my focus is dark, I am actually a positive person by nature and have found strength to get through many obstacles in life - even if some "down" times are more lengthy than others ; maybe it is in my DNA - my blood group is B+ (be positive)!
If you have read this, welcome to a bit of my world ....
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30 thoughts on “Acceptance”
Your last stanza in particular is sheer brilliance, Suzanne❣️
“I belong in this moment;”
right from the start, flowing through…you’ve captured this sense so poignantly and beautifully, Suzanne….thank you for this 🤍🌷
Your poem feels very personal – and I could feel your words. Thanks for linking my essay. I’m surprised and touched to have played a small role in your inspiration. I invite your readers to visit because they may find inspiring nuggets.
Hello Frank, thank you for your comment – I do like Beach Walks and Reflections but sorry I hadn’t realised I had done this …sorry… I did accidently when I shared the prompt, so your thanks should be with Destiny …. Afraid inspiration for me comes from a word prompt, and then it happens in my mind …. but I have had a look and will look again 😊
Thank you…. ☺️. You would think so but to stay belonging to yourself is hard. If I get asked somewhere that I really don’t feel comfortable, maybe I don’t feel I fit in or belong, it makes me feel anxious, so I don’t go… it can make me unliked by some, but I can take that, I just have found over the years I have to do what feels right not always what others want …. Freedom costs …! If that makes sense. I am pleased you liked my poem 💞
Your last stanza in particular is sheer brilliance, Suzanne❣️
~David
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thank you David
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Yes! ❤️
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Such a touching poem Suzanne
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thank you 💞
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You’re most welcome
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So well said. Especially the last stanza. Gorgeous. Xo
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thank you 💞
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“I belong in this moment;”
right from the start, flowing through…you’ve captured this sense so poignantly and beautifully, Suzanne….thank you for this 🤍🌷
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Thank you Destiny, it turned into a thought provoking prompt for me – thank you, I enjoyed the write 💞
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my pleasure, Suzanne….much can be found when we search 🤍🙏🌷
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Your poem feels very personal – and I could feel your words. Thanks for linking my essay. I’m surprised and touched to have played a small role in your inspiration. I invite your readers to visit because they may find inspiring nuggets.
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Hello Frank, thank you for your comment – I do like Beach Walks and Reflections but sorry I hadn’t realised I had done this …sorry… I did accidently when I shared the prompt, so your thanks should be with Destiny …. Afraid inspiration for me comes from a word prompt, and then it happens in my mind …. but I have had a look and will look again 😊
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No apology necessary
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Your quote was lovely, now my brain fog has lifted and I have connected your name with the your site – which is right up my street! 😊
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And I saw the site name and didn’t connect the quote, but it was lovely … I am so silly at time … 😊
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“I belong to myself;
feel a sense of home within all places with welcome open arms” BEAUTIFUL.
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Thank you so much 💞
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Beautifully written, Suzanne. 💖 Your poem says what I wanted to say. I may not post mine now. I’ll post yours instead! 😊❤️👏
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How funny. – post yours please – maybe we should “tapestry” them 🥰
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Nice idea. I love tapestries!
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Well said, and brilliant last stanza.
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Thank you 💞
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You’re welcome. Suzanne.
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I really like that last stanza. I’ve often wondered if we need to be invited to feel that we belong. (K)
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Thank you… I know what you mean, I think maybe an invite opens doors of chances to belong ….
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Yes, that makes sense.
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Suzanne this one is beautiful! To belong to one’s self is the ultimate freedom. ❤
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Thank you…. ☺️. You would think so but to stay belonging to yourself is hard. If I get asked somewhere that I really don’t feel comfortable, maybe I don’t feel I fit in or belong, it makes me feel anxious, so I don’t go… it can make me unliked by some, but I can take that, I just have found over the years I have to do what feels right not always what others want …. Freedom costs …! If that makes sense. I am pleased you liked my poem 💞
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Hi, Suzanne! 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 is now live, and it’s hosted by our wonderful Punam Sharma!
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/05/08/w3-prompt-106-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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