April wary start month before the clock strikes noon listen out for practical jokes harmless fun a custom for what reason fools’ day business year-end time to sum up the year into numbers; profit and loss no interest in words just bottom line counts here changeable month short-circuited moments shafts of rain to showers of sun invigorate my skin with opposites fresh starts sweet fragrance lifts my mood; draws me outside sleepy layers peel from my eyes natures song in my ears brightness awakes colour flutters then blooms outdoor plans spring to life tastebuds turn from comfort to light time to lose weight this month Déjà vu thoughts for me every April
This Weeks POW Heather (Sgeoil) gave us the following prompt:
Write a poem about… April!
What comes to mind when you think of the month of April?
Draw from your memories, your five senses, activities you associate with the month… go wherever this prompt takes you! See more about this prompt here
I chose to write a Behrquain Swirl: little found about this form, but I liked the shape and changeability of it which fit my thoughts on this prompt, like the ebb and flow, ups and downs of April….
Poetic form:: Behrquain Swirl A poem of 30 lines, a syllabic form invented by Madison Shaw, aka Arkbear on Allpoetry 2/4/6/8/6/4/2/4/6/8/6/4/2/4/6/8/6/4/2/4/6/8/6/4/2/4/6/8/6/4/2 the form should be centered with care given to appearance.
My husband says I am a nightmare, actually, a ”complex nightmare”, said with love and understanding of course! In truth the phrase probably does sum me up which is why I will use it.
Explanation:-
• Complex due to my thoughts being varied, deep and even conflicting
• Nightmare due to their constant, numerous and consuming nature.
I am an emotional writer, finding writing a medium with which to express myself; I find this difficult verbally and am averse to any conflict.
I am creative and artistic at work and hobbies; (working in jewellery) but only have enthusiasm for “bespoke” creations. I find it difficult to label a theme to my writing but recently am enjoying learning and experimenting with different forms of poetry. A few very difficult years emotionally have drawn me to this genre. Somehow, I am finding more clarity in my thoughts by using words that are not always so clear, or even placed in a structure that take me out of my comfort zone.... hmmm work that one out LOL.
I am excited to see what I write, as it is a total surprise to me every time; but draws me....
My life experiences are such that I have a personal view on most subjects and if you follow me you may find my topics to be what my daughter would call “random”.
Even when my focus is dark, I am actually a positive person by nature and have found strength to get through many obstacles in life - even if some "down" times are more lengthy than others ; maybe it is in my DNA - my blood group is B+ (be positive)!
If you have read this, welcome to a bit of my world ....
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“Outdoor plans spring to life”– so relatable! Where I live it’s the season where everyone starts to come out of their self-imposed hibernation and the calendars seem to fill up in moments. 😀
A lovely poem for April
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Thank you Sadje 💞
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You’re welcome
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I love it. Yes. I love it. April is bright and beautiful xoxo
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Lovely summation of April with an interesting poetic form! 😃
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Thank you, yes I thought so, have to try these things 😊
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perfect for the month 😁
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Thank you ☺️
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Suzanne this is a beautiful poem wrapped in a string-of-pearls-poem form! I enjoyed your vision of April!!
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Thank you 💞 oh I like the name for the form … 😊
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terrific, Suzanne! This is April in a nutshell!
~David
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Thank you David… 💞
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Hi, Suzanne! 👋🏻
Just wanna let you know about this week’s W3 prompt, which is hosted by our brilliant Ben Tonkin.
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/04/24/w3-prompt-104-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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“Outdoor plans spring to life”– so relatable! Where I live it’s the season where everyone starts to come out of their self-imposed hibernation and the calendars seem to fill up in moments. 😀
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Yes exactly … 😊
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That is a new poetic form for me. I think it was a perfect choice for the whirlwind of April.
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Thank you Heather, it was new for me, saw it and thought I would give it a whirl… thank you for an enjoyable prompt, so many different responses 💞
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You’re welcome.
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