24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 28 & 29 – Clear & Bright

24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge 1 Minutes 
Spring sprays meadows gold
as Dandelion clocks wait
on the perfect breeze
Daisies unfurl in the sun
plucked as links for chains
in blossoming new friendships
glowing in the warmth
of richly spread Buttercups
laying paths of molten sun

Protected bluebells
lay carpets of curtsied heads
woodland neighbours who
watch life play in the meadows
out in the bright clear open

After being ill I am a little behind with writing prompts and then forgot to post this! Never mind – will keep posts together to keep my record of syllabic poetry challenges over the year

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My husband says I am a nightmare, actually, a ”complex nightmare”, said with love and understanding of course! In truth the phrase probably does sum me up which is why I will use it. Explanation:- • Complex due to my thoughts being varied, deep and even conflicting • Nightmare due to their constant, numerous and consuming nature. I am an emotional writer, finding writing a medium with which to express myself; I find this difficult verbally and am averse to any conflict. I am creative and artistic at work and hobbies; (working in jewellery) but only have enthusiasm for “bespoke” creations. I find it difficult to label a theme to my writing but recently am enjoying learning and experimenting with different forms of poetry. A few very difficult years emotionally have drawn me to this genre. Somehow, I am finding more clarity in my thoughts by using words that are not always so clear, or even placed in a structure that take me out of my comfort zone.... hmmm work that one out LOL. I am excited to see what I write, as it is a total surprise to me every time; but draws me.... My life experiences are such that I have a personal view on most subjects and if you follow me you may find my topics to be what my daughter would call “random”. Even when my focus is dark, I am actually a positive person by nature and have found strength to get through many obstacles in life - even if some "down" times are more lengthy than others ; maybe it is in my DNA - my blood group is B+ (be positive)! If you have read this, welcome to a bit of my world ....

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7 thoughts on “24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 28 & 29 – Clear & Bright”

  2. Your poem is such a vivid capture of the beauty of spring. I especially love these lines: “Dandelion clocks wait
    on the perfect breeze
    Daisies unfurl in the sun
    plucked as links for chains
    in blossoming new friendships”
    Dandelion clocks!💛

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    1. I used to love blowing them as a kid, I have to admit to now trying to cut them off before the breeze catches them and I get even more in my lawn 😂😂. Weeds or (wildflowers) grow so much easier than my flowers I spend so much time over..!!
      Thank you Melissa 💞

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